Feedback to others:

To Simon:

Good work Simon. Great topic and it has evidence and fact hyperlinks to support your argument. But you do realize that you did it all backwards, it's all a bit confusing at the start, But overall, great job. Can't wait for the final draft.

To Monique:

 So this is your secret, I might turn gay for this, I might even turn as beautiful as you ^_^.....it's not what your thinking. It's Informative, it seems like you pushed it to an extent to talking about how important it really is to exaggeration, I may be wrong though I may be right.
I think maybe you can add a background design to make more livelier, like adding a make  up or mascara you can make it bright with colors : )


 To Eddie:

 yo great job!

It's quite a read, I like how you put together the critical facts and opinions from all your resources.
but you know in my opinion, I think that Euthanasia is good for all of us, cause it causes people to move on and get on with their life, I mean there are LOTS of things in life we can do to help others and experience life rather than waiting for someone to live or die, so why not let it be legal? ^_^


To  Ken:

Cool read. I like how it really gives the negatives with lots of information about health and safety, it's great I'm lost for more words : )

To Tsehai:

great you made a point, it actually is all rooted in disciplining the mind in the first place, if guys were total knowledgeable on how to control their sexual energies by strategies governed by the higher nature of mind and if women would actually meditate on growing in better  in understanding many lots of thinking cultures and lifestyle everything would change.
but so many people don't, that why it's seems right to submit to rules that are for the primitive side of man and women.

 overall this is a great read, good job!